Writing Tips from THE WALKING DEAD

I was not destined to be obsessed with The Walking Dead. To misquote Shakespeare, “Some are born to love The Walking Dead…, and some have The Walking Dead thrust upon them.”

I, friends, am a member of the later (and perhaps lesser) group.

It started when I was teaching a literature & ethics course at Roanoke College a few years ago. In different classes, and in the midst of different conversations, students would pointedly ask (as if their question were 100% relevant to the topic), “Do you watch The Walking Dead?”

“No. I don’t like scary shows,” I’d answer. “They make me want to wet myself.”

“Well, you should watch it,” they’d respond with youthful enthusiasm, not to mention an unfounded confidence in my post-pregnancy bladder.

I’d smile and say “perhaps”–thinking, not a chance in hell–and steer the conversation back to the matter at hand.

After about five of these classroom exchanges (plus another when I was interviewing a renovation specialist for a feature in a business magazine), I began to wonder what the universe was trying to tell me.

Apparently it went something like this:

WatchTheDead

Ok, Universe. Message received. I got my bum to the library and checked out the first season on DVD. And watched it in one sitting.

Now, a few short years later, my in-season Sunday night ritual goes something like this:

foist kids on husband…

lock self in room…

consume new episode of Walking Dead without blinking…

check twitter for #TheWalkingDead during commercials…

consider getting therapy…

tweet stupid questions about what I didn’t entirely understand about the episode…

get answer from tweeps…

check out more #TheWalkingDead tweets…

have mind blown by some guy on twitter who notices everything…

watch The Talking Dead after-show with the adorable nerdist Chris Hardwick (seen here in Eugene’s Mullet)…

scour message boards for conversation about just aired episode…

check Tumblr and Deviant Art for new Daryl fan art…

Daryl's Wings by cpn-blowfish, DeviantArt
Daryl’s Wings by cpn-blowfish, DeviantArt

check out all posted previews of next episode…

tweet about how seven days is just… too… long… to… wait… for… next… gasp… episode…

ignore husband’s attempts to stop me from talking about about characters he doesn’t know…

drift to sleep for next six nights in puddle of melted brain matter…

dream that Carl walks in front of a bus and I have no way to stop him…

repeat.

So, as I approach the long, hot summer (or as it is known to Walking Deadheads, “the black hole between Season 4 and 5”), it occurs to me that this zombie drama has fed not only my zombie-ish appetite for complex moral dilemmas involving the undead, it has also enriched my understanding of what it takes to create a good story.

So with no further ado (and yep, I am aware this entire post has been nothing BUT ado up to this point), here are a few of the writing tips I picked up from watching The Walking Dead:

1. Everyone’s gotta suffer.

Suffering distills a character traits into their purest form. And nothing shows that better than The Walking Dead. We don’t get people, we get people in the raw.

If life didn’t suck and the world wasn’t glutted with all those eager, innard-munching zombies, the characters might not ever show their greatest kindness. Or greatest weakness. Or greatest courage. Or all three. (And sometimes all three at the same time.)

This suffering notion is probably something I should have picked up long ago when I read all that Greek drama in college. I remember my beloved professor repeating pretty much daily “we must suffer, suffer into truth.” Yet, somehow it never occurred to me that the reason freshmen were still reading about Agamemnon and Clytemnestra all those thousands of years later was because of the suffering as inextricably as the truth.

2. The more resonant the character, the more dramatic the swan song.

Hershel’s beheading. Andrea and Milton’s barber chair pas de duex. Lizzie and Mika’s twisted and senseless deaths. Think of anyone you’ve cared about on the show. Now think of the way that character ended their time on screen. There are almost always more bangs than whimpers. By his final curtain call, I was even bawling my eyes out over Merle (or really Daryl’s loss of Merle).

Big characters deserve a big death. It’s a mark of respect. Of course, since we’re not all writing about a zombie apocalypse, this big-for-big equation can translate into all kinds of big equivalents: big love, big failure, big discovery, big regret, big ball of string, big dream of becoming the best tutu seamstress on the east coast. Whatever.

3. Let the enemy surprise you.

Yeah, zombies are tricky b@*$tards who sometimes pop out of dark corners or rise from the mud in flash-flood areas. The point that has been made continually about this show, however, is that other humans, not zombies, are the real threat. So in some respects, the enemy itself is more nuanced than at first glance.

People aren’t just fighting zombies; they’re fighting humans. Beyond that, those human enemies can be downright surprising.

After seeing the Governor massacre his own townsfolk following his unsuccessful attack on the prison, for example, we find him wandering around like the grand poohbah of hopelessness. He has, to quote the poet Fred Chappell, let his life “grow bearded and strange.” When he then takes up with Lilly and Tara and little Meghan, it seems possible that the newly shaved “Brian” will go forth in the world as a transformed man, sharing SpaghettiOs and letting kids beat him at chess.

But lo and behold, no matter how he tries to avoid his worst self, a few episodes later, he–surprise!–amasses troops and goes all psycho Governor on the prison yard.

What can this teach us about writing?  First, our villains are much richer and more interesting when other, different lives seem entirely possible for them. Simultaneously (and contradictorily), there is a satisfaction of sorts in the reader’s understanding that a character inevitably fulfills his or her ultimate path.

Plucking the cord between those two opposites (the many paths/the single path) is one of the difficulties and joys of writing.

So let your protagonist’s enemy do something surprising. And then let them do what they were born to do.

4. Let the hero surprise you.

When Rick chomped into Joe’s jugular vein, I was, among other things, surprised!

(Perhaps this belongs under the “let your heroes learn from their enemies” column, because the neck-biting thing was a technique Rick must have picked up from some zombie along the way.)

How does that relate to writing? Again, it’s the cord thing. Some tension about where exactly your hero belongs on the moral spectrum isn’t necessarily a bad thing. There can be questionable acts which are justified, just as there can be the veneer of civility (aka Woodbury) over the most savage of hearts.

What situation that will allow your character to do something unforgivable–and still be understood and forgiven?

Go there.

5. When in doubt, “kill” someone.

In an “Ask Me Anything” interview on Reddit, Walking Dead creator Robert Kirkman was questioned about his process for approaching a character’s death.

His response: “Sometimes it’s something I’ve planned and built to for many issues. Other times it’s just me thinking ‘it’s been a while since something really interesting happened’ and killing a character on the fly.”

Cold? You bet. Effective? That too.

Along the same lines, Kirkman had this to say in the same interview:

“In my opinion, I feel like characters ripen like fruit. So while I wouldn’t say the more popular a character is the more likely they are to die, they do have to reach a certain level of popularity before they’ve ‘earned’ the death.

No character is too popular to die. (Suck it, Reedus!)”

First, a message to Kirkman: No killing Daryl!

And while we’re at it, no killing Carl and no (though this may be the futile wailing of the Greek chorus here) killing Rick!

Now, on to the actual objective of this post: how does all this relate to writing?

Killing off characters has long been considered one of the cheapest tricks in a fiction writer’s bag. And of course, it doesn’t–and shouldn’t–make sense for every story we write to end littered with a Hamlet-esque pile of bodies. (Of course, the bodies in The Walking Dead tend to take care of themselves–either being reanimated or devoured–so no littering there.)

That said, there is freedom in the notion of “killing a character on the fly”–whether we’re talking literal or (better in most cases) some metaphorical type of death.

The take-away? Interesting things can happen when we let go of the idea that the characters we love in a story must prevail.

And those metaphorical deaths can take many interesting forms: the loss of their humanity; the separation from whatever matters to them; the death of their dreams.

So, now it’s your turn to tell me: What have YOU learned from The Walking Dead? About writing? About life? About the zombie apocalypse? Post it in the comments below!

~

ZombieMaryMary Crockett is coauthor with Madelyn Rosenberg of the zombie-less novel DREAM BOY. Sadly, she suspects she would be among the first to turn in a zombie apocalypse.

You can make her book happy by adding it to your Goodreads bookshelf or pre-ordering at IndieBound, Amazon, or Barnes and Noble. You can make her happy by saying “hi” on Twitter or Facebook.

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3 thoughts on “Writing Tips from THE WALKING DEAD”

  1. Much like yourself, I got bugged into watching the show that I had zero desire to watch. Now I’m hooked like a crackhead. If everyone understood how deep this show was, how complex the characters are, and how you get to watch DARYL – HELLO, then everyone would watch it. I would love to get my hands on one of those scripts.

  2. aaamazing post!…. about writing? I don’t know… just MAKE IT BIG… I mean really important, if something is to happend it needs to be significant for the characters. about life? I used to be one of the not even surviving day 1 the zombie apocalypse group, but the show made me realize some deep shit… so i made some changes in my life, that help me big time rn but i know with my heart that will help me in the end of the world….. so FUCK YEAH TWD

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