I’ve often preached to any new writer who will listen about writing more than a first book. Oftentimes people will put so much into that first book that they don’t want to let it go… even if it might, in fact, suck. I heard someone compare books to pancakes once—that first one is a complete mess and usually goes in the trash, or, in the case of books, the trunk. (Mine sure did.)
The topic of this post is sort of an extension of that one: try something new. Not only should you write more than one book if you’re feeling stuck; write outside of your usual genre too. I’ve done this three times, and all have been invaluable experiences.
1.) Writing outside of my usual fiction genre
The first time, I used the great excuse of NaNoWriMo to write something fun. The challenge I read about on a blog and decided to try was this: anyone who hadn’t written a romance novel should, well… write a romance novel. My first (trunked) book was an adult paranormal, but not romance. My second (also trunked) book was a YA urban fantasy. So, I had some free time, and I figured, why not?
It was a blast, writing full-bore romance. And while no one will ever see this book, it taught me how to write way sexier romance scenes. While writing an entire book of them isn’t, I discovered, my cup of tea, it helped me be able to inject more romance and tension into those few scenes I do write to spice up my non-romance books.
2) Writing nonfiction
This was a big step for me, and less fun, but in a really challenging, enriching sort of way. I had an interesting experience in high school, and decided to write about that year of my life in the form of a YA memoir. The jury is still out on whether or not you’ll see this, but even if you don’t, the experience was still hugely valuable.
If you need a quick way to learn how to write dynamic characters, just try writing a real person as a character. You instantaneously have a three dimensional picture of this “character” in your mind since, you know… this person actually exists in three dimensions. Writing real people is excellent training for writing complex, interesting fictional characters since you can remember the steps you took to get that real person down on the page and apply it to your fiction later.
Also, writing nonfiction really made me think about story structure and appreciate the freedom I have when writing fiction. Trying to cram real events into a strong story ARC is soooo much harder than when you can make those events up. After writing the memoir, the story ARC for my next work of fiction and the events that comprised it came together with surprising ease.
3) Writing for a different age
I’d already written adult and YA fiction, so when I got the opportunity (more on this soon) to write for the middle grade age-range, I was excited—this was something new! I couldn’t rely on the relationship dynamics I was used to in order to craft my older characters, which involved more adult themes (even in YA) and oftentimes some type of sexual tension, however subtle. I had to tap into my inner 10-year-old, and write a story based on friendship and family.
But whether or not you’re writing for a 10-year-old audience or 50-year-old, those types of relationships are crucial. To go back to the basics, and build something in a new way, was a wonderful exercise in writing relationships of all types.
Now, I bid you–go write something new and wild! Something you never would write, normally. You might be surprised by the benefits.
AdriAnne shares a home base in Alaska with her husband, but has spent two cumulative years living abroad in Africa, Asia, and Europe. While writing occupies most of her time, she commercial fishes every summer in Bristol Bay, because she can’t seem to stop. Her debut YA sci-fi/fantasy, WORDLESS, is coming August 8th, 2014 from Flux Books. You can follow her on Twitter and like her on Facebook.
I was not destined to be obsessed with The Walking Dead. To misquote Shakespeare, “Some are born to love The Walking Dead…, and some have The Walking Dead thrust upon them.”
I, friends, am a member of the later (and perhaps lesser) group.
It started when I was teaching a literature & ethics course at Roanoke College a few years ago. In different classes, and in the midst of different conversations, students would pointedly ask (as if their question were 100% relevant to the topic), “Do you watch The Walking Dead?”
“No. I don’t like scary shows,” I’d answer. “They make me want to wet myself.”
“Well, you should watch it,” they’d respond with youthful enthusiasm, not to mention an unfounded confidence in my post-pregnancy bladder.
I’d smile and say “perhaps”–thinking, not a chance in hell–and steer the conversation back to the matter at hand.
After about five of these classroom exchanges (plus another when I was interviewing a renovation specialist for a feature in a business magazine), I began to wonder what the universe was trying to tell me.
Apparently it went something like this:
Ok, Universe. Message received. I got my bum to the library and checked out the first season on DVD. And watched it in one sitting.
Now, a few short years later, my in-season Sunday night ritual goes something like this:
foist kids on husband…
lock self in room…
consume new episode of Walking Dead without blinking…
check twitter for #TheWalkingDead during commercials…
scour message boards for conversation about just aired episode…
check Tumblr and Deviant Art for new Daryl fan art…
check out all posted previews of next episode…
tweet about how seven days is just… too… long… to… wait… for… next… gasp… episode…
ignore husband’s attempts to stop me from talking about about characters he doesn’t know…
drift to sleep for next six nights in puddle of melted brain matter…
dream that Carl walks in front of a bus and I have no way to stop him…
So, as I approach the long, hot summer (or as it is known to Walking Deadheads, “the black hole between Season 4 and 5”), it occurs to me that this zombie drama has fed not only my zombie-ish appetite for complex moral dilemmas involving the undead, it has also enriched my understanding of what it takes to create a good story.
So with no further ado (and yep, I am aware this entire post has been nothing BUT ado up to this point), here are a few of the writing tips I picked up from watching The Walking Dead:
1. Everyone’s gotta suffer.
Suffering distills a character traits into their purest form. And nothing shows that better than The Walking Dead. We don’t get people, we get people in the raw.
If life didn’t suck and the world wasn’t glutted with all those eager, innard-munching zombies, the characters might not ever show their greatest kindness. Or greatest weakness. Or greatest courage. Or all three. (And sometimes all three at the same time.)
This suffering notion is probably something I should have picked up long ago when I read all that Greek drama in college. I remember my beloved professor repeating pretty much daily “we must suffer, suffer into truth.” Yet, somehow it never occurred to me that the reason freshmen were still reading about Agamemnon and Clytemnestra all those thousands of years later was because of the suffering as inextricably as the truth.
2. The more resonant the character, the more dramatic the swan song.
Hershel’s beheading. Andrea and Milton’s barber chair pas de duex. Lizzie and Mika’s twisted and senseless deaths. Think of anyone you’ve cared about on the show. Now think of the way that character ended their time on screen. There are almost always more bangs than whimpers. By his final curtain call, I was even bawling my eyes out over Merle (or really Daryl’s loss of Merle).
Big characters deserve a big death. It’s a mark of respect. Of course, since we’re not all writing about a zombie apocalypse, this big-for-big equation can translate into all kinds of big equivalents: big love, big failure, big discovery, big regret, big ball of string, big dream of becoming the best tutu seamstress on the east coast. Whatever.
3. Let the enemy surprise you.
Yeah, zombies are tricky b@*$tards who sometimes pop out of dark corners or rise from the mud in flash-flood areas. The point that has been made continually about this show, however, is that other humans, not zombies, are the real threat. So in some respects, the enemy itself is more nuanced than at first glance.
People aren’t just fighting zombies; they’re fighting humans. Beyond that, those human enemies can be downright surprising.
After seeing the Governor massacre his own townsfolk following his unsuccessful attack on the prison, for example, we find him wandering around like the grand poohbah of hopelessness. He has, to quote the poet Fred Chappell, let his life “grow bearded and strange.” When he then takes up with Lilly and Tara and little Meghan, it seems possible that the newly shaved “Brian” will go forth in the world as a transformed man, sharing SpaghettiOs and letting kids beat him at chess.
But lo and behold, no matter how he tries to avoid his worst self, a few episodes later, he–surprise!–amasses troops and goes all psycho Governor on the prison yard.
What can this teach us about writing? First, our villains are much richer and more interesting when other, different lives seem entirely possible for them. Simultaneously (and contradictorily), there is a satisfaction of sorts in the reader’s understanding that a character inevitably fulfills his or her ultimate path.
Plucking the cord between those two opposites (the many paths/the single path) is one of the difficulties and joys of writing.
So let your protagonist’s enemy do something surprising. And then let them do what they were born to do.
4. Let the hero surprise you.
When Rick chomped into Joe’s jugular vein, I was, among other things, surprised!
(Perhaps this belongs under the “let your heroes learn from their enemies” column, because the neck-biting thing was a technique Rick must have picked up from some zombie along the way.)
How does that relate to writing? Again, it’s the cord thing. Some tension about where exactly your hero belongs on the moral spectrum isn’t necessarily a bad thing. There can be questionable acts which are justified, just as there can be the veneer of civility (aka Woodbury) over the most savage of hearts.
What situation that will allow your character to do something unforgivable–and still be understood and forgiven?
5. When in doubt, “kill” someone.
In an “Ask Me Anything” interview on Reddit, Walking Dead creator Robert Kirkman was questioned about his process for approaching a character’s death.
His response: “Sometimes it’s something I’ve planned and built to for many issues. Other times it’s just me thinking ‘it’s been a while since something really interesting happened’ and killing a character on the fly.”
Cold? You bet. Effective? That too.
Along the same lines, Kirkman had this to say in the same interview:
“In my opinion, I feel like characters ripen like fruit. So while I wouldn’t say the more popular a character is the more likely they are to die, they do have to reach a certain level of popularity before they’ve ‘earned’ the death.
No character is too popular to die. (Suck it, Reedus!)”
And while we’re at it, no killing Carl and no (though this may be the futile wailing of the Greek chorus here) killing Rick!
Now, on to the actual objective of this post: how does all this relate to writing?
Killing off characters has long been considered one of the cheapest tricks in a fiction writer’s bag. And of course, it doesn’t–and shouldn’t–make sense for every story we write to end littered with a Hamlet-esque pile of bodies. (Of course, the bodies in The Walking Dead tend to take care of themselves–either being reanimated or devoured–so no littering there.)
That said, there is freedom in the notion of “killing a character on the fly”–whether we’re talking literal or (better in most cases) some metaphorical type of death.
The take-away? Interesting things can happen when we let go of the idea that the characters we love in a story must prevail.
And those metaphorical deaths can take many interesting forms: the loss of their humanity; the separation from whatever matters to them; the death of their dreams.
So, now it’s your turn to tell me: What have YOU learned from The Walking Dead? About writing? About life? About the zombie apocalypse? Post it in the comments below!
Mary Crockett is coauthor with Madelyn Rosenberg of the zombie-less novel DREAM BOY. Sadly, she suspects she would be among the first to turn in a zombie apocalypse.
Whether you are musically into the boy band One Direction or not there’s a lot you can learn from their journey to making their dreams a reality. *grabs your arm* Where are you going? This is going to be fun! Play along!
Here’s what I learned on YouTube about the Boy Band and their journey that began on the UK X-Factor:
Be Eager: If you watch the boy’s performances on X-Factor-any of them-there’s a common thread of absolute EARNEST need to follow their dream. (Bonus points for looking up Niall Horan’s audition). Lucky for them this comes across as charm, and not desperation. They were all sooo green (you’ll excuse them, they were all teenagers) but they had a spark of something yet to come. We all have to start somewhere!
Be Tireless: In the video footage of the boys on the X-Factor, you’ll often here the judges comment about the band’s tireless work ethic. Everyone must take time to learn and improve your craft. Work for it. Take classes, read in you genre, join critique groups, and rewrite until every word shines. Videos I’ve watched show the work ethic continued after the the X-Factor experience–they work as hard as they play–and the improvement from their first year alone and then to present day is amazing.
Love It: Any performance you watch on the X-Factor . . . or video after the X-Factor . . . these “laddy lads” are loving it. Their passion comes through. Be positive about your work, positive online, and positive in general. People are drawn to positive energy. It’s infectious. This helps if, like the boys, you have people along that “get it”. There is no doubt these boys are best of friends, and loving what they do. Bond with fellow writers at conferences and on twitter, then you can celebrate your sweet successes together as these boys do.
Be Patient: The success business, whether music or writing, is all about riding out the ups and downs. Rejection and failures are part of it. The 1D boys all auditioned as solo acts, and were all CUT in “boot camp” week. Then, they were called back and formed in a group. They then placed third, which is to say, they LOST. But then . . . they were signed and became the biggest boy band in the world. The journey may be lightening fast, and it may take years. But the secret? Do not give up.
Be Thankful: While they now have staff of dozens (security, stylists, etc.) and are filling stadiums worldwide, the boys are basically the same. Silly? For sure. But they still work hard, are kind to everyone they meet, and remember to call their mums. Stay grounded no matter where the journey takes you. Be thankful to those who helped you, give a helping hand to those coming up next, and . . . call your mum.
Thanks for playing along!! Find me on twitter and let me know if I’ve inspired your inner fangirl! @MonicaYAWriting